Can someone give me some criticism on my game?

[KaL]

http://kingdomofnpc.x10.mx/nwe/index.php

What can I do to make this game better or what do you guys look for in a text based game?

[Callan S.]

Probably a good thing to add is a guest mode, where it registers you automatically so you can play and have the option of renameing from guest to a name of your choice latter on in the session if you so choose.

That way people can start trying it out instantly.

[KaL]

Ok will do. I'll create a guest login