Well, I'm at near completion of the programming end and have started some designing. I would like some critique on the main page, I made everything myself, but I'm not sure if it's original enough.
Also tell me if you guys find the images take too long to load.
http://lodire.com/
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							Critique please.
Critique please.
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Re: Critique please.
Very nice! Only critique I could offer would be that the text in the two lower boxes ("Update" and "Activity") are a bit hard to read the with dark background. If the text was brought up a bit in hue I think it would really help out its readability. Other than that, looking very good! 
			
			
									
						
							
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Thanks Jack! I thought the text was a little big too, I don't want to to stand out too much though, what do you think of it now?
			
			
									
						
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Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.
			
			
									
						
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Re: Critique please.
Yeah, that is the only other thing. Besides, that looking awesome!Falken wrote:Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.
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Re: Critique please.
yes very nice!
			
			
									
						
										
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Re: Critique please.
Recent activity on the website: 
			
			
									
						
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Looks very nice indeed.
I like the gold/yellow against the bluey/topaz background, really makes it stand out.
			
			
									
						
							I like the gold/yellow against the bluey/topaz background, really makes it stand out.

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