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				Critique please.
				Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:46 pm
				by Chris
				Well, I'm at near completion of the programming end and have started some designing. I would like some critique on the main page, I made everything myself, but I'm not sure if it's original enough.
Also tell me if you guys find the images take too long to load.
http://lodire.com/
Cheers!
 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:40 pm
				by SpiritWebb
				I really like the setup of the page.  Kudos, very nicely done
			 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 1:42 am
				by Jackolantern
				Very nice! Only critique I could offer would be that the text in the two lower boxes ("Update" and "Activity") are a bit hard to read the with dark background. If the text was brought up a bit in hue I think it would really help out its readability. Other than that, looking very good! 

 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:36 am
				by Chris
				Thanks Jack! I thought the text was a little big too, I don't want to to stand out too much though, what do you think of it now?
			 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 2:16 pm
				by Falken
				Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.
			 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:41 am
				by Jackolantern
				Falken wrote:Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.
Yeah, that is the only other thing. Besides, that looking awesome!
 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:24 pm
				by hallsofvallhalla
				yes very nice!
			 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 11:12 pm
				by Jackolantern
				Recent activity on the website: 
Someone took a dump.
And then later...
It smelled bad.
LOL
 
			
					
				Re: Critique please.
				Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:35 am
				by Xen
				Looks very nice indeed.
I like the gold/yellow against the bluey/topaz background, really makes it stand out.  
