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Critique please.

Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:46 pm
by Chris
Well, I'm at near completion of the programming end and have started some designing. I would like some critique on the main page, I made everything myself, but I'm not sure if it's original enough.

Also tell me if you guys find the images take too long to load.

http://lodire.com/

Cheers!

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:40 pm
by SpiritWebb
I really like the setup of the page. Kudos, very nicely done

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 1:42 am
by Jackolantern
Very nice! Only critique I could offer would be that the text in the two lower boxes ("Update" and "Activity") are a bit hard to read the with dark background. If the text was brought up a bit in hue I think it would really help out its readability. Other than that, looking very good! :)

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:36 am
by Chris
Thanks Jack! I thought the text was a little big too, I don't want to to stand out too much though, what do you think of it now?

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 2:16 pm
by Falken
Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:41 am
by Jackolantern
Falken wrote:Looking good, altthought the date in the updates box is almost not readable.
Yeah, that is the only other thing. Besides, that looking awesome!

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 1:24 pm
by hallsofvallhalla
yes very nice!

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 11:12 pm
by Jackolantern
Recent activity on the website:
Someone took a dump.
And then later...
It smelled bad.
LOL

Re: Critique please.

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:35 am
by Xen
Looks very nice indeed.
I like the gold/yellow against the bluey/topaz background, really makes it stand out. :D